Thank you for the tip! I've been thinking of putting topics in my phone so I can talk about just one subject and I have ADD and this video kinda shows that hahaWelcome!
You have a good start. Sound is alright and picture quality is mighty fine, and it all was short and sweet. Keep it up!
Nothing to pick on really. Maybe focus more on a single topic if you like being informative. Not that you sidetracked in the middle of your origin story(which is good).