Funny New To Motovlogging

[Hollow]

I would really love some feedback on my channel as a whole so ill post a video.
I'm not looking for "nice video" or my ego to be fanned, i really want to improve the quality of my videos so if you have any feedback no matter how small, please let me know! Thanks in advance!
(Disclaimer, there is swearing...eh alot of it)

 

[HippoDrone]

hahahaha, awesomeness.

Righty, I hate how long your intro goes on for, I get the creepy thing, it is just too long. Ummmm Tell America to get some bendy roads!

That is all, other than that I bloody loved it and subbed.... oh.... I forgot.... I hate the meme things..... at least put a helmet on them or somit to differentiate from all the other over memed motovlogs.... my vids are crap so don't judge me.... but I subbed, so gimme a kiss or a hug or a lolly or somit!

 

[Hollow]

hahahaha, awesomeness.

Righty, I hate how long your intro goes on for, I get the creepy thing, it is just too long. Ummmm Tell America to get some bendy roads!

That is all, other than that I bloody loved it and subbed.... oh.... I forgot.... I hate the meme things..... at least put a helmet on them or somit to differentiate from all the other over memed motovlogs.... my vids are crap so don't judge me.... but I subbed, so gimme a kiss or a hug or a lolly or somit!

haha i found walteriffic recently and decided to stop using memes, atleast not as much(you can see that in my latest video) the intro video is the same video each vlog but with a new sound bite for each video, i decided on this after getting frustrated while trying to find good music for it, but one thing that concerns me about it is that new viewers wont know whats going on so i have been considering paying to have a new intro made.

 

[Hollow]

oh and florida man... it sucks, no hills and most roads are straight makes it hard for when i want to tap into my inner Scootertino Rossi

 

[HippoDrone]

I need to sort an intro, and an outro, need to polish my turd of a channel. I honestly was chuckling at the ostriches!

 

[Hollow]

I need to sort an intro, and an outro, need to polish my turd of a channel. I honestly was chuckling at the ostriches!

I recommend Fiverr, its not bad if you look around and speak to the sellers beforehand

 

[CafeRob81]

Intro is really cool, but yes long. You can chop it a little to speed it up. I wouldn't speed up the clip but rather create some interesting cuts to move the viewer forward. Experiment with chroma key filter on your intro if you know what that is, could be cool. The meme thing is over done these days but adding little photos isn't! Just don't use the crazy popular ones or make your own!! Less singing more talking for me at least. That's where i tend to loose interest.

Story or facts on where your at or where your riding maybe? you've got a lot of subs so your doing something right, better than I am!! You guys are a little more wild than me so maybe I need a few redbulls or a line of the white china dust before I hit record hahahaha.