New Season's intro, looking for feedback.

[Baldbiker]

 

[YBGuy]

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You have a lot of green in the background (grass, trees) so it makes it a little hard to see your title text because it is also green. Maybe you could try adding some more shadowing to the text to make it stand out from your video in the background?

 

[nophix]

I dig it! Like YBGuy siad, maybe add a secondary layer to the letters to bring them out some, but otherwise good.

 

[Theodor]

I like most of the shots, but I can not feel the image\transitions being in sync with he music, and to me that is a bit disturbing.

 

[Skipshift]

I'll second what YBGuy and Theodor said.
The green text blends in to the shots a couple of times. An outline or shadow on the letters would help them pop out.
Also adjusting the cuts to fit the music would make it flow just a little bit better.

 

[LoneWolfer]

The length is a bit of an issue. 3-5 seconds for an intro is plenty. I often times will skip videos that have intros that are over that because I have limited time to watch stuff and I'm not wasting it with intros that if I am subbing to I would have to wait thru over and over again. I would suggest expanding this to make it a channel trailer to 25-30 seconds and then also working on the title to make it stand out. A stroke can be useful, movement of the text will also make that green stand out more against some of the green moments of the video.

 

[Moto Mengy]

I like it, but I do agree with YBguy, I'd make the text color something more contrasting other than green.

 

[Baldbiker]

The length is a bit of an issue. 3-5 seconds for an intro is plenty. I often times will skip videos that have intros that are over that because I have limited time to watch stuff and I'm not wasting it with intros that if I am subbing to I would have to wait thru over and over again. I would suggest expanding this to make it a channel trailer to 25-30 seconds and then also working on the title to make it stand out. A stroke can be useful, movement of the text will also make that green stand out more against some of the green moments of the video.

I had an intro that was 6 seconds and I wasn't happy with it. It was way too fast, so I deliberately made this one a little longer. It still seems short enough to not lose attention of any viewers. In my opinion

 

[Baldbiker]

I dunno guys, I get the thing about the green writing, although I can read it perfectly fine, but I tried white and it is much worse, I tried outlining, shadow, other colors, and nothing looks any good. So I'm sticking with the green lol. But thanks anyway! I do appreciate the feedback!

 

[Guest]

I liked the length of it, maybe 2-3 seconds less would be okay, but it wasn't bad! I liked the intro overall.

What stood out to me was that you have bikes, people, people with bikes, and then.... a random barbecue?!
Let's play a game of "one of these things is not like the other" - guess which one I would remove? lol

If you wanted to keep your video length, you might want to swap in footage of the bike, as that's the only thing that's really missing and might tie it all together. Unless your channel is also about barbecues in which case keep it and ignore 90% of what I said lol.

The font was okay to me. You can probably get a logo made on fiverr if you felt inclined.

If you want to add some comedy and play off of the "Bald" part of bald and biking, you can throw a bottle of headshine in there like this lol

 

[Baldbiker]

I liked the length of it, maybe 2-3 seconds less would be okay, but it wasn't bad! I liked the intro overall.

What stood out to me was that you have bikes, people, people with bikes, and then.... a random barbecue?!
LOL it's not a barbecue, it's a historical plaque

 

[Guest]

Why'd they turn a BBQ into a historical plaque?