Opinions On My 'epic' (?) Intro?

[/ryantanyu]

Hello everyone,

I tried not wanting an intro in any of my videos, but I failed! Now I think I want an intro in my videos.

My intro is sort-of a preview of what my channel is about, the types of clips to expect in my channel.

I have not many friends really to ask about how my intro looks. They all said it's great, but I realize I'm actually fishing for criticism. Can you guys lend me some?

 

[ChunksLife]

iv just made an intro i kept it short and sweet but i like yours every thing happens a little to fast for it to soak in .

 

[/ryantanyu]

iv just made an intro i kept it short and sweet but i like yours every thing happens a little to fast for it to soak in .

I agree, another thing happens before the last thing registers. Uhm, is that a good thing?

 

[/ryantanyu]

I mean, I don't wanna take too much of the viewer's time showing the Intro, but I wanna excite them as well. :-/

 

[Ride_NZ]

That's really awesome mate!

 

[Pigs]

I like it, can't really think of anything that I would want to change/

 

[jthomas]

That's a good intro. Short, interesting and contained a lot! Would not deter me if I saw it at the start of a video, I say go ahead and use it!

 

[lupin]

Shows stuff isn't too long.

Me like.

 

[/ryantanyu]

Yay, thanks a lot! I've also decided to re-do my official logo, and I've come to realize I'm spending too much time on branding instead of content lol. Thank you everybody, your feedback mean a lot!

 

[/ryantanyu]

And yea I'm definitely using that Intro now. Tbh I have much more clips I wanna show on the Intro (like a fist-fight on the side of the road, thief chase, first-hand firefighting experience, my nasty highside, my drifting my Katana 750, etc.), I guess I can alternate/variate my Intro instead

 

[SighBored]

Not bad. First view of it and initial thought was "dafuq?" cause it didn't soak in.. But if people watch your videos often they'll probably get used to it.

 

[Ramblin']

Can't really complain about anything short like this - good stuff! I only really get nit picky with long intros

I like that you can change up the clips to make it new but the same...

my only thing would be maybe take out 1 or 2 clips so that the others can play longer - I could be wrong but each clip went by fast and it might look better with a little more time on each

keep it up sir!

 

[CPFilms]

Nice short and sweet, great job!

 

[/ryantanyu]

Wow thanks everyone for the feedback!

Can't really complain about anything short like this - good stuff! I only really get nit picky with long intros

I like that you can change up the clips to make it new but the same...

my only thing would be maybe take out 1 or 2 clips so that the others can play longer - I could be wrong but each clip went by fast and it might look better with a little more time on each

keep it up sir!

I did exactly that, and will upload here the final cut. Thank you!

 

[RoadSprock]

It all flows abit too fast for me, try removing some videos and extending the others and/or make longer?