General My 11second Intro Feedback Wanted Please

[BlackMamba]

Hello finally got round to making my channel intro its 11 seconds long and id love to have your feedback

 

[Beyond46]

Looks cool! Me personally have a bit problem with the static sound :/

 

[IVG_Moto]

Im with Beyond46, not really enjoying the Phsssspt, Phsssspht in intros... Thats me personally tho. Like something mello or uppbeat.

 

[LOTR]

Good intro. "Slender Time"