General Beginner Motovloger

[RedRider!]

Check me out I'm a new Moto vlogger looking for some feedback and what I can do to improve any suggestions welcome. Although I have had a few bumps with my dad card recently it was cutting out now I got a legit one and not a Chinese ripoff. You will see more improvement in vlog 7

I haven't been on here much as if been quite busy getting to grips with Moto-vlogging. I have managed about 6 vlogs so far and number 7 is underway.
Hypertard has been helping me out along the way - just need some more feedback other than hyper now. -thanks hyper by the way!

Be sure to watch all six I have improved since the first vlog!

Thanks for taking the time too read this.

Speak soon!!!

 

[dandoolittle]

OK - Lets give this a whirl

The start of the video, I got lost and not really sure what the video is about. Second thing is the time of 14minutes, argh!

Personally I found that you do the same thing that most people do when they start out. They upload the first video as though everyone knows them etc. People don't, help them learn you etc

Once I've got the idea of what you're on about, its not a bad video dude. You're new, thats cool. If I wasn't purposely watching your video, I would have turned off before 4 minutes as I didn't have a clue what the video is about etc

Stick to one subject and try not to bounce around too much

 

[RedRider!]

OK - Lets give this a whirl

The start of the video, I got lost and not really sure what the video is about. Second thing is the time of 14minutes, argh!

Personally I found that you do the same thing that most people do when they start out. They upload the first video as though everyone knows them etc. People don't, help them learn you etc

Once I've got the idea of what you're on about, its not a bad video dude. You're new, thats cool. If I wasn't purposely watching your video, I would have turned off before 4 minutes as I didn't have a clue what the video is about etc

Stick to one subject and try not to bounce around too much

Thanks for the feedback mate, I will save this information and make further improvement thanks buddy!! Again great feedback I will make further improvements. It is hard starting out I will find my self and try and avoid the niche of vlogging like everybody else

 

[dandoolittle]

Try not to over think it fella and just have a laugh.

I guess, find your niche