Critique My Intro?

motofuzzy

motofuzzy

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So i dont have any footage yet but im trying to get my basis of videos arrange, you know what every video will have so i dont haft to do during the editing of the actual video.

I used just a plain ol image of my bike for now

 
Think you need some prominent text there if that's an intro, nothing stands out and grabs I'm sorry to say, the music suggests an impending doom too, maybe something lighter and not on a 'cello?
 
Lurch said:
Think you need some prominent text there if that's an intro, nothing stands out and grabs I'm sorry to say, the music suggests an impending doom too, maybe something lighter and not on a 'cello?
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Dont have to say sorry, thats why im posting up.
 
motofuzzy is your name, that gives me an idea. In my opinion your current issue is bland and boring. But what I think you could do is use a glitch effect in which you can keep your bike in the background, but your name will glitch in with the glitch effect, then glitch back out. Incorporate some glitch audio effects and you'll be on your way :D I could actually do it for you if you'd like, it should only take a few minutes. The intro itself wouldn't be too long, maximum 5 seconds.
 
SpartanHDX said:
motofuzzy is your name, that gives me an idea. In my opinion your current issue is bland and boring. But what I think you could do is use a glitch effect in which you can keep your bike in the background, but your name will glitch in with the glitch effect, then glitch back out. Incorporate some glitch audio effects and you'll be on your way :D I could actually do it for you if you'd like, it should only take a few minutes. The intro itself wouldn't be too long, maximum 5 seconds.
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Sure have at it, i appreciate it
 
Hey can you post the picture again, I can see it when I log into the forum on my phone, but here, there are many posts missing, very strange 0.0
 
SpartanHDX said:
Hey can you post the picture again, I can see it when I log into the forum on my phone, but here, there are many posts missing, very strange 0.0
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The picture I posted was actually in private message but anyways

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Yes spartan remade it for me, it was way better.

Now ive got that covered i need to get all the gear, they have already sanded and salted the roads this year so i think im done riding (more than just around the neighborhood) until atleast late February

Late February and early march its a crap shoot here, either warms up for good or it snows like a foot.
 
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