General Second Motovlog Ever!

[Finalyzed]

Please watch and let me know what you think of my motovlog! This is my second one ever, and i appreciate any kind of constructive criticism! Below it, Ill put my first one up for comparison. I didn't record my first in wide view so that changed!

 

[Finalyzed]

Dont pay any attention to the 2nd Motovlog and instead click this one! there was a rendering issue with my 2nd video so now its reuploaded! Yay for reuploads!