Feedback Needed New Intro!

[BehindBars]

Hey guys, just got round to making my new intro. Got a new camera (Sony RX100) to get some different shots, and here is the first sneek peak I'm excited about this year and making this has got me buzzing!

Let me know what you think, feedback would be hugely appreciated!

 

[CodeNameAB]

Its always good to keep it short and neat and thats what you have done. You could also increase the font size of your channel name a bit.
And I see that you chose the fine English weather for your intro

 

[BehindBars]

Thanks Interesting about the font size, I was actually thinking about possibly making it smaller, or just using a neater font.

Thats the best weather we've had in ages haha!

 

[CodeNameAB]

Thanks Interesting about the font size, I was actually thinking about possibly making it smaller, or just using a neater font.

Thats the best weather we've had in ages haha!

Actually its not just about font size but the placement I guess. When BehindBars appears at bottom left, it partly covers the bike (which is the main subject till 0:07) so instead you could put your name at the centre of the screen after 7s when you just show the landscape. This is just my thought

 

[BehindBars]

Actually its not just about font size but the placement I guess. When BehindBars appears at bottom left, it partly covers the bike (which is the main subject till 0:07) so instead you could put your name at the centre of the screen after 7s when you just show the landscape. This is just my thought

Awesome idea dude, makes a lot of sense not to cover up the bike

Fiddled around with the intro, heres the new one. Hopefully this looks better!

 

[CodeNameAB]

Awesome idea dude, makes a lot of sense not to cover up the bike

Fiddled around with the intro, heres the new one. Hopefully this looks better!

Glad you found my feedback useful mate, I certainly prefer this one

 

[scooterwuf]

Nice. What did you use for the vertical camera move?

- Wuf

 

[BehindBars]

Nice. What did you use for the vertical camera move?

- Wuf

Filmed handheld with a Sony RX100, 1080p 50fps. Slowed it down to 75% speed in editing


p.s. thanks for the subs subbed back

 

[scooterwuf]

That explains it. Thought it was pretty smooth, but seemed like a small move for a drone. Nice technique.

- Wuf

 

[JoshAFJ]

v2 is definitely the best of the two. The first one seemed to go on to long at the end, but the new text filled that void nicely.