new intro?

[Mikesmotorbike]

just slapped together in 5 mins, what do ya think?

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWwoIdZkB7g[/youtube]

 

[senthx]

ZOMBIES - dammit grab the shot gun. Erm.

sorry, I play too much xbox.

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

ZOMBIES - dammit grab the shot gun. Erm.

sorry, I play too much xbox.

lol it's quite fitting for my next video

filmed during this afternoons ride + stop at airport

 

[lauriejennifer]

It's missing... something. I think I see what you're going for, though. Keep tweaking it.

Beware using copyright stuff in your intro. That came back and bit me. I've had to take down and revamp a lot of my old vlogs.

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

I just can't figure out what's missing

 

[gpzDave]

I just can't figure out what's missing

You were facing the wrong way?

 

[senthx]

you know I think i'm going to use Chip Tunes, or program an emulator or old 8 bit computer, with some classical music on mine

classical music is mostly out of copyright

At least one new post has been made to this topic. You may wish to review your post in light of this.

I am going to hunt down the programmer responsible for this feature, and throw a pie at him.

thats 2 pies now

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

lol it can be usefull. For example the 3 word game I'll use it as is for the next vlog and look at the responce it gets. And LJ I think it's ok as it's under a certain amount of time. not sure though

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

*update* added a fade out (not on YT vid)

 

[lauriejennifer]

*update* added a fade out (not on YT vid)

Yup! That's it. It needed a clean finish.

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

ZOMBIES - dammit grab the shot gun. Erm.

sorry, I play too much xbox.

oh, and : Xbox!? really? what games?

 

[CLARKY]

It needs you to suddenly spin roun and double thumbs up at the end with a completely over the top facial expression

 

[Yarek]

I was hoping you'd turn round and have a zombie mask on

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

could have been an idea but this whole day/ ride/ videos to come were total improvisation

 

[Chuckles85]

make it black and white, cut it so you start walking into the shot sooner (at the moment we are waiting for something), bring the name in sooner with a slight zoom and end the walking scene with you walking opposed to standing still and add the fade out.

something to try it may be a total epic fail but sounds good in my head

 

[senthx]

ZOMBIES - dammit grab the shot gun. Erm.

sorry, I play too much xbox.

oh, and : Xbox!? really? what games?

Call of Duty zombies mode
I made a game with zombies in
zombie apocaplypse
dead rising

erm and all the rest

 

[Friz]

Fade the titles in.

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

thanks for the tips, here's what it looked like in the vid. I'll have a fiddle

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYb2-JCy ... 7Ne0RB9zgy

 

[CLARKY]

I'm not going to beat about the bush....

I'm not a fan of it...

I think you should flutter footage of riding into the shot... Like it jumps from walking to riding to walking / riding... .... Or... Keep the intro as a still shot of you already in the distance and the camera zoomed more towards the left hand corner (bike takes up more of the screen) then a simple fade out...

I find the walking bit too dramatic for such a well lit situation.. And the "what's in your head" lyrics a bit TOO specific...and egg sucking

But take this as constructive and down to taste... I am quite odd after all.... Which you will see in my intro...

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

cheers for the tips to be honest I really did it as it seemed to fit in with the video to follow (zombie).

honestly those are good tips. I was thinking of trying to find a different one aswell. I'm just not too sure what to do.