my new intro to my vlogs!

[6Foot4Honda]

any advice on what i should change?
I tried to make it different from others..and the trolling "licence" is because I do that alot in my vlogs >.>

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJj35jT9gSA

 

[DSN]

Swapped the editing around for you a bit.

Let me know what you think.

http://youtu.be/n9mD5aFs_SY

 

[DSN]

Added a tracked title -> http://youtu.be/c_WeXTAPILM

Would of course smooth it out. But you get the idea.

And the cut is to remove the wheelie dropping off.

Best I could do in the 10 mins before I go to work

Hope this helps.