Funny How To: Toast A Marshmallow (with Your Bike...)

awesome.
I like the cuts to the music at the beginning.
probably a bit long near the end of it though.
It's nice that you are trying to tell a story with all the different camera angles.
I agree with you on the ending, it was weak.

Should have finished with you trying to eat it, but possibly smearing it over your chinbar and pretending to cry because you can't put it in your mouth with a helmet on?
the success kid at the end is just cheesy, get rid of it.
 
The quick cuts to the beat in the beginning was cool. Wish you would have showed the marshmallow though!
 
I had this idea for a video for quite some time.. haven't seen this done before. I searched and searched to see if there were any other similar videos, but I found nothing :cool:. Was pretty fun to make, working with the different camera angles etc. I had a little bit of a headache afterwards though... :D


I hope that you didn't eat it afterwards...HAHAHA!
 

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