Rant Going To Work, Talking About Poop At The Workplace And Practicing U-turns After Work

Fuz

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So this is my second video and I'm still getting used to this whole thing. Any advice on what I can do to improve my vids would be appreciated!

 
I like the backing music, but I think you could have left it till the rambling part of the video. It distracted me from the rant, so I had to go back and re listen. It reminds me of Premises' Incoherent Ramblings and a YoutubePoop video. If that helps :)
 
Youtube Poop vid is a decent description - I'm not the most verbose/eloquent of people (which is why there are so many cuts between sentences) and I have a slightly weird sense of humour so I'm having fun editing it into a collage of random things!
 
It's one of the funnier videos I have seen on here I'll give you that :D And I have the same problem. I watch my videos and I think Needs More Cuts!
 
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Thanks mate! Hopefully over time I'll get better at talking while riding. I'm also trying to keep my videos around 5-10 mins, less if possible. I feel like that's a sweet spot for the modern day attention span, haha!
 

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