another attempt at an intro

[Mikesmotorbike]

If the beeps are annoying I can get rid of em, just a friend said that would work well.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jSDGfJ4sM3U[/youtube]

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

well someone on here was my 1st dislike, feel free to actually tell me why?

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

though tbh those beeps do seem annoying.

 

[Yarek]

I think the beeps are a good idea, but I'd go for a different beep - something a little less harsh or high pitched.

Maybe something like this...

http://www.sound-effect.com/pirsounds/P ... EEP_FM.WAV

 

[noddydon]

Just fine as it is - change nothing.

Don

 

[gpzDave]

I like the idea but if you could cut it down to 5 seconds that would improve it.

well someone on here was my 1st dislike, feel free to actually tell me why?

If you look at the 'members' tab under the motovlog logo, you'll see that there are LOTS of members on here who have never made a single post. So I'm sure there are plenty of trolls lurking in the shadows.

 

[thunderous71]

I love the idea takes me back to some 80s TV shows (that is not meant as an insult btw).
Think it needs a little polish and yea the beep is a little off.

+1

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

cheers guys =) yeah I'll give the beeps a fiddle.

 

[lawman]

I like the concept and the bleeps!

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

what about this beep? http://www.mediacollege.com/downloads/s ... eep-07.wav

 

[CLARKY]

I like the idea... but SYSTEM ON... needs to be in caps


Also I think Randomly throughout the year you should film a different one exactly the same but you stall

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

Attempt 2! thanks for the felp guys =)

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HuVOC7bJ-1w[/youtube]

 

[ariderslife]

this is a very good idea. someone who is into video editing / motion graphics would make a wicked intro outa this

 

[CLARKY]

Another way of doing the same idea is to do some Quick editing showing the parts of the bike you are dealing with.

Leave the text to cover all footage.

Do quick shot of key being turned
Quick shot of Oil level
Quick shot of Fuel guage
Quick shot of gear lever being pushed.

Although maybe it should be

Oil
Fuel
Gear
Ignition

And final shot should be of moisture blowing out of exhaust on start up

Makes the intro a little less mono with the same view throughout and not much happening...

 

[Jestington]

I like it good idea.

 

[Mikesmotorbike]

as far as different shots are concerned I was planning it as being a sort of HUD type thing, me being linked with the machine (that sounds cheesy) so use this on next vid?