Critique My Intro?

[motofuzzy]

So i dont have any footage yet but im trying to get my basis of videos arrange, you know what every video will have so i dont haft to do during the editing of the actual video.

I used just a plain ol image of my bike for now

 

[Lurch]

Think you need some prominent text there if that's an intro, nothing stands out and grabs I'm sorry to say, the music suggests an impending doom too, maybe something lighter and not on a 'cello?

 

[motofuzzy]

Think you need some prominent text there if that's an intro, nothing stands out and grabs I'm sorry to say, the music suggests an impending doom too, maybe something lighter and not on a 'cello?

Dont have to say sorry, thats why im posting up.

 

[SpartanHDX]

motofuzzy is your name, that gives me an idea. In my opinion your current issue is bland and boring. But what I think you could do is use a glitch effect in which you can keep your bike in the background, but your name will glitch in with the glitch effect, then glitch back out. Incorporate some glitch audio effects and you'll be on your way I could actually do it for you if you'd like, it should only take a few minutes. The intro itself wouldn't be too long, maximum 5 seconds.

 

[motofuzzy]

motofuzzy is your name, that gives me an idea. In my opinion your current issue is bland and boring. But what I think you could do is use a glitch effect in which you can keep your bike in the background, but your name will glitch in with the glitch effect, then glitch back out. Incorporate some glitch audio effects and you'll be on your way I could actually do it for you if you'd like, it should only take a few minutes. The intro itself wouldn't be too long, maximum 5 seconds.

Sure have at it, i appreciate it

 

[SpartanHDX]

Sure have at it, i appreciate it

Send me the picture of your bike and I'll start working on it

And sorry if I sounded harsh in my previous comment, I read it back and I feel bad.

 

[SpartanHDX]

Hey can you post the picture again, I can see it when I log into the forum on my phone, but here, there are many posts missing, very strange 0.0

 

[motofuzzy]

Hey can you post the picture again, I can see it when I log into the forum on my phone, but here, there are many posts missing, very strange 0.0

The picture I posted was actually in private message but anyways

 

[SpartanHDX]

The picture I posted was actually in private message but anyways

Oh, that means there aren't any missing messages XD
I didn't realise because I was on my phone, my bad! I'll start working on it now

 

[Lt. Rigby]

Yesh, that music didn't really cut it. Was too dark and stalkerish.

 

[GHOSTNINJA]

I think SpartanHDX is on the right track. Very cool for him to offer and help. That is why I enjoy this community so much.

 

[Rusty]

that was quite nice of you SpartanHDX this place is really starting to grow on me.

 

[SpartanHDX]

I think SpartanHDX is on the right track. Very cool for him to offer and help. That is why I enjoy this community so much.

that was quite nice of you SpartanHDX this place is really starting to grow on me.

I made it for him, he seemed to be happy with it
If anyone else needs anything just ask

 

[Lurch]

Need a sports physio massage on my shoulders...

 

[SpartanHDX]

Need a sports physio massage on my shoulders...

Sure thing, are you free on Saturday? I'll send someone over

 

[Lurch]

Early morning or late afternoon. Daughter's bowling party around lunchtime...

 

[GHOSTNINJA]

I made it for him, he seemed to be happy with it
If anyone else needs anything just ask

New gorpro would just about do it! haha

 

[dandoolittle]

Music would work if you did some jump cuts of random riding? Then the last frame, have the still

 

[RoninK6]

I made it for him, he seemed to be happy with it
If anyone else needs anything just ask

One Million Dollars, maybe ?

To me, that old intro seemed like it was a little something from "The Adams Family", hmmm ~.....

 

[motofuzzy]

Yes spartan remade it for me, it was way better.

Now ive got that covered i need to get all the gear, they have already sanded and salted the roads this year so i think im done riding (more than just around the neighborhood) until atleast late February

Late February and early march its a crap shoot here, either warms up for good or it snows like a foot.