Feedback Needed 2023 Intro option #1

[R-Rated]

I am working on my 2023 intro and decided to check what the universe has to say about the possible versions.

Here is the first option:

 

[Hippo-Drones]

What was the dusty bit? It was very pixelated on my PC

 

[R-Rated]

What was the dusty bit? It was very pixelated on my PC

Mountain climb run. First time I saw one in person.

 

[Moto Mengy]

I like all of it EXCEPT for the blurry hill climb part. I'd cut that out as its not adding much, in fact its taking more away than it adds IMHO.

 

[R-Rated]

Thank you for the feedback so far.

Instead of doing new thread I will just add option 2 here:

 

[Hippo-Drones]

Its good to have fun, but I'd have though showing bikes would make for a more useful intro! hahaha

 

[R-Rated]

Thank you again everyone for chiming in. @Theodor already spotted this one on my channel as option #3:

 

[Theodor]

If you can zoom out the hillclimb bit, in the first one, I'd vote for that, as best so far. Or maybe you need to put another clip instead of that, completely. Currently it just stands out so much, but not in a positive way.
edit: or maybe you can use AI to increase the resolution. I know these can do wonders with images. Maybe you will need to do it frame by frame, which will be a pain... just a thought.

 

[R-Rated]

Here is 4. It is made to cross fade into whatever video.

 

[Hippo-Drones]

I like this last one, but it seems there is a long time between turning the ignition on and starting the bike, if that time was shorter, it would be more punchy!

 

[R-Rated]

I like this last one, but it seems there is a long time between turning the ignition on and starting the bike, if that time was shorter, it would be more punchy!

Good input. I think I can time shift from after the FI pressurizes the tank to start with no noticeable effect other than shaving a second or so.

 

[TriumfAnt]

I always prefer the short and sweet intro. I'm talking 5 seconds or less. Viewers just skip them otherwise.
But they're perfect for your outro, where you can add End Screens so people can click on previous videos of yours. Keep them engaged.